Goodbye "love"

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Sitting inside my room thinking of you
tossing and turning don't know what to do
how could i miss you someone i hardly know
this feeling's so weird but it's starting to grow
i know for sure i'm in control
but when i think of you i start to fall
i know i should stop but i don't know how
so i'm writing this poem to release it all somehow
love is a game a game i could never win
it cuts like a knife it pricks like a pin
i know if i'd love you i'd soon feel the pain
your heart is like stone and i'll be waiting in vain
i started this poem feeling so blue
i'm ending it now with words that's so true
goodbye "love" maybe i'll see you someday
'coz if we're meant to be "love will find a way"
 

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love is a game a game i could never win
it cuts like a knife it pricks like a pin


This is true
it`s a game that I always lose
U know..
it`s so hard to lose a lover
but the heart is still beating
Thanks Allah 4 that


Thanks alot 4 ur nice words
I really enjoyed reading them
Feel happy
 

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I am very happy because you are engoyed wen you reading thie phargraph
thanks alot
realy thanks
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عاشقه الصمت

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Words and very realistic ..
love is beautiful at the same time difficult
But that's what attracts love
It's tough


Nice to challenge the difficulties to get love

Thank you for the amazing words

..with my love..
 

boogey man

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bravo man
its very nice and reality
thats the love nice and hard
go ahead man
thnx
 

SONDA

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Very intersesing
ur poem start sad
but somehow it ends optimistic

i always do beleive in the power of love
whatever the road is hard
if i fall in the with a person and it ends happily, so that's my real love
if the contrary, it means that i have to carry on and on
and by the end, it will be so charming
coz love himself find me and not me

beleive this wisdom
'coz if we're meant to be "love will find a way"
it s so real



accept my passing
and forgive my words
 

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